Thursday, May 28, 2015

REalpoetikVIEW #1

The Differences (Pressed Wafer Editions) by Patrick Morrissey

 Reviewed by Shamala Gallagher

        I believe in poetry because it is a refuge for the quiet aspect of awareness. It does not follow the rules of the rest of the spectacle. It does not dazzle in the conventional sense, and it has small and dubious traffic with that flip side of dazzle, money. “The peculiarity of poetry appears to us to lie in the poet’s utter unconsciousness of a listener,” wrote John Stuart Mill in “Thoughts on Poetry and its Varieties.” This is a Romantic notion and, in our age of high dazzle, perhaps an anachronistically romantic one. But it still describes the poetry I find most potent: address so intimate it is no longer address, speech so intense its closest relative is silence.
   
       The tongue occupies                   
                   a silence at the heart
 
             of the sentence,

writes Patrick Morrissey in “Variable Songs.” Morrissey’s is the kind of utterance I favor—a strange variant of speech intent on articulating what speech normally withholds.
        Morrissey’s The Differences is a tiny book, smaller than the book I make with my palms if I place them side by side to open and close. Each cover bears a simple pattern of a grass-green circle and a half on a white field. Each poem occurs in small sections, rarely longer than nine lines, each on its own page and thus cut with bareness, whose wind whistles through. Here are the lines from “Variable Songs” again, because this book is full of stanzas I want to read twice:

  
          The tongue occupies
      
             a silence at the heart
      
        of the sentence. If I

 
           look long enough my mouth
      
            opens to expose a sung
      
        negative: if I, if I. Syll-

   
        ables fall into a small
       
            heap of conditionals,
       
        so many attempts to see.

The lovely “l” and varying “o” sounds of “look long enough” constitute an imperative important to this poem. “Looking long enough” is not only a visual endeavor but also a sonic one, and, further, an embodied one—its “attempt to see” is the attempt to bring the wholeness of being into the present space of attention. When the second stanza catches up the hanging “if I” from the end of the first, the poem opens itself willingly to the uncertainties integral to any moment.

   
        How much can happen in
   
        a given room during any       
   
        one hour of a particular
   
        day,

begins the book’s first poem. Its title, “In a Room,” suggests the book itself as the offered room. By way of welcome, Morrissey reminds us how an instant in lyric work can attune us to life’s infinite and minute transactions. Thus the first page is a passage of white space that leads us into a chain of moments—of disparate locations and characters connected by the diaphanous fabric of attention. We spend one flicker of time with a painter leaning toward a canvas:

   
        ... A series of
   
        proposals and refusals—thus
   
        he bears down on the surface.
   
        A form surfaces, a momentary
   
        declaration trembles there.

After that, we don’t know where we are except that we are inside the trembling of the moment’s declaration, inside a scene of hesitation.

   
        Moving the furniture, taking
   
        a walk—ongoing doubt
            and then the fact of going
            on at all. There is always
            someone saying no. The sheer       
            materials as real as a stranger.

The existential looming in these lines turns a moment of consciousness into a shared terrain. In doing so, it undoes the strange, intense fact central to Western existence: that consciousness is experienced in solitude, that each person’s experience of the world takes place within the boundaries of an individual mind and body. It makes palpable a portion of the poet’s interior—and, by extension, of my interior—that was previously not knowable. In the poem’s space of heightened feeling and perception, I experience subjectivity as if it is interchangeable, as if there is, at least temporarily, no difference between self and other. “We stutter us into it,” writes Morrissey in a love poem.

   
        We stutter us into it
   
        this place we make and make.


Thursday, May 21, 2015

Claire Marie Stancek


ROUND

after John Clare 

 

 

Round The Nest A Welcome Guest
                                                                                                    No Memry Left Old Feelings Gloaming Strange
With Jobbling Fingers Lurch To Fill A Hat
                                                                                                 And Hopeless Hope Hopes On And Meets No End
My Manhood But A Memory Left
                                                                                                             A Cunning Guest Goes Bye Unnoticed Still
The Place We Occupy Seems All The World
                                                                                            And Neighbour Tennant Spell Struck Listens Close
Ive Hunted White Necks High On Mornings Noise
                                                                                                   Swee Swee A Buzzing Loud And Long And Loud
To Peep At Five Ink-Spotted Greeny Shells
                                                                                                                A Hollow Startling Prison Dwelling Noise
And Sluthering Down The Knotty Trunk Amazd
                                                                                                                           Fades But Memry Left A Prison Still
A Hissing Noise Assails A Crimpled Guest
                                                                                                                    Remember Still And Still Endure Again
Ive Nestled Down In Prisons Still And Strange
                                                                                                               Revise Old Feelings Weeding Memry Lost
And Neighbour Meets With Neighbour Unawares
                                                                                                              A Great White Guest Goes Deafening Bye
Peal On Peal Revising Feelings Still
                                                                                                And Strangers Heels Tramp Speckled Places Past
As Gusts Again Enraptured Wrap The Nest
                                                                                                     Ingulphed Ive Nestled Deep In Evenings Down
A Stranger Guest Ive Clumb With Hook And Pole
                                                                                                       But Still And Still Endure Old Feelings Pains
To Old Ones Cries And Crimpled Quaking Breast
                                                                                               A Strange Formed Accident And Stranger Guest







Claire Marie Stancek is a PhD candidate in the English Department at UC Berkeley, where she teaches classes on nineteenth century literature and creative writing. Poems from her manuscript, "MOUTHS," are forthcoming in Oversound, Berkeley Poetry Review, Animal, Typo, and elsewhere.